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Question #1:

Need help with a new name for a character?

I decided that I'm going to rename one of my characters. Currently her name is Allison but I just don't think her name fits her.

This character is female, she has blonde hair and brown eyes, she appears sweet, nice, and caring but she is manipulative, obsessive, crazy, psychotic. I want a name that sounds like she's crazy.

Here are some names I'm considering for this character:
Veronica
Mallory
Kelsey
Brianna
Heather
Blair
Alyssa
Sage/Saige
Riley
Rebecca
Aubrey
Courtney
Makenna
Leah
Piper
Devin
Regan
Emily

Which name sounds like a name for a crazy girl?
One of the reasons why I don't want her name to be Allison is because I have a friend named Allison and it's hard for me to imagine a crazy character named Allison especially since I have a friend (who isn't crazy) named Allison. I hope that makes sense.

Question #2:

Does This Prove Evolution?

There is a certain populace in our society that does act more like animals than humans. Obviously don't want to be civilized enough to wear clothes as they wear their pants below their waists and baseball caps crooked or backwards (which defeats the purpose of blocking the sun from your eyes). Like other animals, always counting on the humanity of humans for a hand out in the forms of welfare, food stamps, medicaid and free child care. As should be, a lot of them wind up in a caged zoo in the form of prison where they are the majority. This group seems to feel that they are entitled to the upper class comforts of the U.S.A. without having to work or get an education for it. The uncivilized nature of this group is also noted in their young for sexual promiscuity is very common in this group at very early ages. Also noted is the selfish nature of these creatures who sometimes will hook a female on drugs in order to force them into prostitution or any other means to make a profit for themselves. Does this prove we actually did evolve from apes or is there a group that comes from creation and another that evolved from animals?
@anonnie: I never mentioned any race. What would make you think I was talking about race?

Question #3:

What do I do about this crush?

Ok, I'm an 18 year old guy and there's this girl I know at school who I've known for just over a year now who I had a dream about a few months ago, after that dream I started thinking about her constantly! We're not exactly friends but we do talk from time to time and are friendly, she's in a couple of my classes in school too. When we went on a school trip the week afterwards I was trying to like catch up to her to try and spark a conversation. The funny thing is I sometimes don't even know why I'm obsessing, she's good looking and has a great funny and caring personality but I can't find the underlying reason under this crush, sometimes I think I've just thought about it too much. She's not the usual type I fall for too (appearance wise).

The feelings, although they were still present, died down for a couple months but they resurfaced last week after a party and now I can't stop thinking about her, it's been driving me mental for about a week now. I get all the feelings that a person with a crush probably could get around a girl, such as smiling if she does something cute and the butterflies in the stomach, and she always catches my eye on Facebook. I think she is way out of my league and hangs around a completely different social circle of friends to me and talks to all the 'good looking', 'cool' guys. I don't consider myself good looking or funny or outgoing really, maybe kind but that's about it. She probably doesn't even think that much of me and would probably think I'm deluded if she ever found out! I've tried to forget about it but it's only made me think about it more.

I really am stuck in what to do, am I really just thinking about it too hard? If I have a crush on her do I try and tell her even though I get the feeling nothing will ever happen or that I may still be unsure? I just need your opinions on what's going on and what I should do! I can understand that's a lot to take in haha, thanks for reading though!

Question #4:

me a gold digger and cheating husband?!honest answers!?

I have been wondering about this
how would you feel if you see your wealthy,famous and good looking husband/boyfriend or partner sitting with some girl at an almost empty restaurant,where your better half is standing continuously standing behind the girl's seat,fiddling with her,kissing her head,wrapping his arms around her chest,neck and is laughing and joking like crazy????

and that such events are repeated and then he takes a small time off to spend time at home and going for holidays(including telling the entire world via twitter/face book that its a family vacation),including writing happy birthday to your better half on face book/twitter?!!??

that why he thrashed his female friend of 5 years for her sex life on radio if he didn't have anything to do with her with whom he was so close that he was caught on camera in the dark parking lot of his workplace,posing very intimately.???
how would you feel?
that he doesn't erase the tattoo of my name on his arm when he cheats so much and has very little feelings for me??
that he kisses me in public only when "he can kiss you while people see it"and when he can't I sit behind the scenes??
that he married with the intention of having a baby as quickly as possible,every independent woman rejected him because of his COCKY nature
if a husband behaves like this and his wife's reaction is like the one mentioned above,would you all her a gold digger,selfish and materialistic woman who sees her husband as a golden hen?"???
why does he keep showing that he has a perfect family life when he knows what he does??
is he so frustrated that clouding people's eye with such messages fulfills his fantasy??
does he need a doormat to look after their kids as hes not home much so he doesn't divorce???
can fake tweets and messages,written to show the public fill the gap of a loveless relationship???
EVER since he joined these social sites hes started this OTT impression of him being a family man when he actually knows his real deeds.
Since he stays out of home much(doesn't divorce coz he wont get the 3 year old child??) i and i used to work but stopped working even before we got married, has no reservations with the cheating and this is how I act-shes always asking her friends to take her pictures or is clicking her own pictures.she posts pictures making strange faces,sitting on the bed and making strange faces with her friends,then wearing sunglasses,sitting in the stadium,wearing gaudy clothes and getting pictured and taking her own pictures.even if she goes to watch her husband performs and is supposed to backstage she sits with her friends and takes pictures again but now cares when he did drugs in 06,she didn't stop him and came dainty dressed at public events,only calling an ambulance after he stopped breathing from overdose.
what would you call the gf/wife/partner who shifts away at the sight of her "supposed man"even though he didn't approach her.
he owns three luxury cars,couple of mansion like homes,front row of a theater,expensive trips to islands like Bahamas,has name and fame etc.?
we met at a bar and we claimed it was love at first sight.engaged in a year,married a year later and had a baby immediately as he wanted one REAL FAST.
and am i a gold digger??
what can you say about us?

Question #5:

have you ever watched a dog or cat be put to sleep or die?

its been years since i worked at the shelter, and when i hear of a dying dog, it reminds me of watching dogs get put to sleep, and thrown in the dumpster. and then to make matters worse, my sister in law had a dying 8 month old pup last year, and she didnt get it vet care and told me to come over, and i looked into her eyes and watched her die. the post down below makes me feel so bad.

have you watched it? how do you deal with it

Question #6:

my eyes are going inside and i'm using system for 8 hrs i just 23 but i'm looking as 25 please tell the remedy?

how to take care eyes and hair glowing

Question #7:

would you call me a gold digger wife?

how would you feel if you see your wealthy,famous and good looking husband/boyfriend or partner sitting with some girl at an almost empty restaurant,where your better half is standing continuously standing behind the girl's seat,fiddling with her,kissing her head,wrapping his arms around her chest,neck and is laughing and joking like crazy????
and that such events are repeated and then he takes a small time off to spend time at home and going for holidays,including writing happy birthday to your better half on face book/twitter?!!??

that why he thrashed his female friend of 5 years for her sex life on radio if he didn't have anything to do with her???
how would you feel??
how can someone not erase the tattoo of my name when he cheats so much and has very little feelings for me??
that he married with the intention of having a baby as quickly as possible??
does he need a doormat to look after their kids as hes not home much so he doesn't divorce???
if your better half(on whom he is cheating) doesn't not care what would you call her???
can money buy happiness???
can fake tweets and messages,written to show the public fill the gap of a loveless relationship???
how can someone kiss you in public only when "he can kiss you while people see it"and when he can't you sit behind the scenes??
when he did drugs in 06,she didnt stop him and came dainty dressed at public events,only calling an ambulance after he stopped breathing from overdose.
what would you call the gf/wife/partner who shifts away at the sight of her "supposed man"even though he didn't approach her.
why does someone keep showing that he has a perfect family life when he knows what he does??
is he so frustrated that clouding people's eye with such messages fulfills his fantasy??
why so much mind games????
and if the spouse has no reservations with the cheating and acts like this-shes always asking her friends to take her pictures or is clicking her own pictures.she posts pictures making strange faces,sitting on the bed and making strange faces with her friends,then wearing sunglasses,sitting in the stadium,wearing gaudy clothes and getting pictured and taking her own pictures.even if she goes to watch her husband performs and is supposed to backstage she sits with her friends and takes pictures again but now cares
if a husband behaves like this and his wife's reaction is like the one mentioned above,would you all her a gold digger,selfish and materialistic woman who sees her husband as a golden hen?"???

Question #8:

I can't sleep at all at nights?

Ok I'm a normal teen.. I'm outside as much as I can be and this week I got a half term break off school...
I have been off school for five days and today is my last day off... I've noticed my sleep pattern is completely messing up and I don't understand...

Right now? It is just past 5am and I don't think I've properly slept in 3 days... I'm sleeping over at a friends house tonight and she has been sleeping for at least 4 hours now...
I lye down and try to sleep but I sit with my eyes closed and nothing happens, this frustrates me so I just get up and sit there and I'm really worried that my grades are going to go down in school or I miss my bus some morning because I sleep in, badly...
I'm not one bit tired.. Actually I feel wide awake and I could go outside right now and it would feel as if it is daytime...
The weird thing is? I feel fine... Like I don't need to sleep and I could go all day without it..

Does anyone have any idea how I can get my sleep pattern back on track? Or does someone have some tips? Please only give me serious answers I don't really care what you think of this question etc...

Thank-you! xx
I said serious answers? xD please?
I do exercise when I'm outside, alot!
Thanks for all the answers, I think I'll try some of these tips... :) x

Question #9:

any idea on my ill fated marriage?

and then acts as a family man on twitter and through words in public
can he fill the gap of a loveless relationship???
can you ever fill this void???
how would you feel if you see your wealthy,famous and good looking husband/boyfriend or partner sitting with some girl at an almost empty restaurant,where your better half is standing continuously standing behind the girl's seat,fiddling with her,kissing her head,wrapping his arms around her chest,neck and is laughing and joking like crazy????

and that such events are repeated and then he takes a small time off to spend time at home and going for holidays,including writing happy birthday to your better half on face book/twitter?!!??

that why he thrashed his female friend of 5 years for her sex life on radio if he didn't have anything to do with her???
how would you feel??
what would you do??
how can someone not erase the tattoo of my name when he cheats so much and has very little feelings for me??
does he need a doormat to look after their kids as hes not home much so he doesn't divorce???
if your better half(on whom he is cheating) doesn't not care what would you call her???
can money buy happiness???
can fake tweets and messages,written to show the public fill the gap of a loveless relationship???
how can someone kiss you in public only when "he can kiss you while people see it"and when he can't you sit behind the scenes??
what would you call the gf/wife/partner who shifts away at the sight of her "supposed man"
why does someone keep showing that he has a perfect family life when he knows what he does??
is he so frustrated that clouding people's eye with such messages fulfills his fantasy??
why so much mind games????
why married yet single???
and if the spouse has no reservations with the cheating and acts like this-shes always asking her friends to take her pictures or is clicking her own pictures.she posts pictures making strange faces,sitting on the bed and making strange faces with her friends,then wearing sunglasses,sitting in the stadium,wearing gaudy clothes and getting pictured and taking her own pictures.even if she goes to watch her husband performs and is supposed to backstage she sits with her friends and takes pictures again but now cares
what would you call her and him???

Question #10:

(My Love Life) Need help!!! Trolls & Haters STAY AWAY!?

(Gender) Male
(Age) 17
(Location) Uk Scotland
(Job) College student Game Designer
(qualifications) none
(Friends) Around 3-4 at best

Hello there, I need assistance with a mental health problem that if been experiencing this past year.

I have a girlfriend that is in the usa, I need to come up with £2000-£4000 to see her & live the rest of my life with her, I dont have that type of money! What's been bothering me the most is that i'm not going to be able to take care of my own girlfriend when i'm in the usa because i wont have enough money.

I will have to work for another (2-3) Years at college, Maybe more, She will not wait that long for me, No one can wait that long, I have enjoyed game designing but i'm just terrible at it. I know im a guy but somtimes my eyes tear up.

Telling my own girlfriend that really is Desperate to see me once again i can not see her because of the money issues. I cant find a job anywere because of my location, I need the money fast! I can only think of 2 Reliable & Regrettable ways to get money,

*Joining The British Army* Or *Live a life of crime temporarily*

These two options are very regrettable. My Girlfriend never wants me to join the British Army. She threats of leaving me for it, She cant stand not to see me get hurt/shot/Not there for her anymore/etc

(The British Army)

I am willing to kill for money in the British army. I will follow every single command they have given me. To kill to piss to Eat to do what ever they command like the film (Full Metal Jacket) Once again to remind you my Girlfriend never wants me to join the British Army she threats of leaving me for it. I will not go behind her back.

Or

(A life of crime)

I am willing to bend the rules "here and there" temporarily just until i get enough money for my girlfriend. Selling drugs etc, Harmless drugs like (Weed) & (Cannabis & cannabis Seeds) & (Pot) & (Pot Seeds) Etc I can do this for one full year 20 hours per day and make alot of money enough to traval to usa. Once again to remind you my Girlfriend never wants this to happen!

"Money is like time when you run out of money you run out of time". People Stop to know you & careing for u, Just like a homeless man on the streets. when you run out of money you dont exist like a homeless man. If a homless man gained lots of money. People will start to Recognize him/Personaly Know him/Moving up in the world & Respect him/Etc Without money he will never be Recognized just like me.

I do not want to be a homeless man without money. I will do everything in my power to avoid this stage. Only the smart survive this world! This is for sure im not very smart. Im very dumb. I keep causing accidents and Mistakes. I always will, I am not built for this world. I have thought of committing suicide on a regular basis, Maybe 1-2 times per week but the only thought that keeps me going is my girlfriend being with me raising a family & getting married,

I will not stop at anything! NOTHING! untill i get enough money to go see my girlfriend, No matter what God or the goverment/Judges/ Have to say about it! Somtimes you need to brake the rules to get what you want in life. This is from Experience i'm sure you have Experienced this also.

Please help me! Just remember before you say, Get a job! There are no jobs around here I am not willing to work (20) Hours per day for (3) Years to get £3000-£4000

I want this money right now! Instantly! I will do anything & not stop at anything to recive this type of money within (1) Year, I promiss you this my girlfriend! My everything is wanted for *17 Years* I will not stop at anything!

I dont want small things like,

*Your a pussy!
*Grow up!
*Be a man!

Etc, I want 1000-2000 Word salution to my problem, Not GET A JOB! Because if said why!

Question #11:

Guy problems! Does my crush like me back? PLEASE HELP!!?

On the first day of school when he first came our teacher let him chose his seat in study hall and he chose the one next to me even though no guys were by it. He always comes really close to me and sits next to me in study hall since we can chose wer we seat and everyday I put my backpack in a spot and next thing I know he's rele close to me sitting on the desk next to me. He is always like hello lady! We always talk to. Whenever he walks in front of me in the hallway he always looks back and smiles at me. I always catch his glances too. Whenever he does something good in sports he always looks to see if i saw it. My friends asked him if he liked me and he said no and his friend said why would he? Then later on that day his freind and my crush have a locker by me and his friend said there's (my name) really loud. He always teases me about sports and playfully tells me to shut up. He once was talking to friends and did that romantic lean on my locker.He thinks I'm funny an on the bus he sits diagonally from me and his friiends always say why are you sitting there and he never moves. He gazes into my eyes when we talk. My friends told him I like him and he shrugged it off and said I don't care. Does he like me back? I'm confused..

Question #12:

Is this tense good? Written in present tense?

“My motivations?” I say suspiciously. “What about them?”
“Oh, come on,” Cassandra snaps. “You need to succeed. It’s the thing God put you on this earth for. Everything you strive for, everything to do every day, you have to complete and it has to be perfect. You’re a perfectionist.”
“Really?” I say mildly, as I stash the file in my hands in the drawer below my desk. “Well, Ms. Fitch, since we are on the subject of motivation, I have something to say about you.”
“Oh?” Cassandra says, looking, for the first time, fearful. “And what drives me?”
“The exact same thing as me,” I reply, as a sly grin slides onto my face. “You need to succeed as well. Your fear of failure is like mine in many ways—only you don’t care whether you appear vulnerable or not, something we don’t have in common. I strive for the top, you dive for the low.”
“That’s not true!” she snaps angrily. “I do strive for the top!”
“Do you?” I say, my smile disappearing. “Then why did you shoot Preston Orlando? Why did you take that gun, a GLOCK 19, from Terrence Donovan’s car, and take your ex’s life? That isn’t shooting for the top, no pun intended. That is shooting for the ultimate low.”
All color drains from her face as I say this. She opens and closes her mouth several times before finding her voice again. Whispering, she says, “He deserved it.”
“Did he?” I say coldly. “Does anyone?”
She does not reply. My voice is icy as I continue.
“Here’s what I think happened. Driven to succeed, you try constantly to end up on top, even bribing your boss for promotion. That doesn’t work, so you move on to plan B. You begin blackmailing Preston Orlando, your ex-boyfriend and co-worker. Notice he’s the top journalist for The Wall Street Journal. That doesn’t work, and you see that you don’t have a plan C. It’s over, you think. And, to dramatize your overemotional, overbearing, selfish conclusion, you shoot the one person who shoved you to the side in the first place. And so, you hit your absolute lowest, because you failed.”
She begins to sob. Tears have been threatening her eyes, but only now have they actually spilled over. I decide to finish this.
“Cassandra Fitch, you are under arrest for the murder of Preston Orlando.”
I stand up, leave her there sobbing, and walk out of the room.

Thanks in advance!
Best of luck and wishes,
~Red Jane
EDIT: "Cassandra Fitch, you are under arrest for the murder of Preston Orlando. You have the right to remain silent.”
Derik handcuffs the weeping Cassandra with a relieved look on his face. I stand up, leave her there sobbing, and walk out of the room.

Question #13:

Are virgos usually hot and cold?

i work with this virgo guy at a gas station who i've developed a little crush on. he used to be really flirty and talkative towards me, wanted to know all about me, and was always very attentive and smiley and never took his eyes off mine during a converation. sometimes he'd go out of his way just to say hi to me or to help me with my work.

sometimes, like lately, he acts really cold towards me. when we have down time it's like he tries to avoid me, and if we talk he keeps it short. he's really friendly to everyone else so when he acts cold towards me i don't understand why.

i treat him the same way he treats me: if he's flirty i'll be flirty back, if he acts cold and indifferent i'll act the same.

i wouldn't care that much if he wasn't interested in me romantically, but we have a lot in common so i can't see why he couldn't just be straight up friendly to me instead of hot and cold?

Question #14:

I don't think my sister is making the right decisions help?

My family is Italian and Roman Catholic
My older sister is 21 years old and she turned herself into a Mormon she's been Mormon for a little less than a year and she turned into a horrible person!
Someone told me she talks bad about our religion at her little church which is so wrong because before she would talk wonders about our religion she would even give me advice and what not but now she is wicked!
Right after she turned Mormon She dated this guy from her Mormon church & everyone thought that she changed religions because of him so time went by she was still this (excuse me).. she was still a *Bitch* Well time went by they hung out a lot and what not she wanted marriage ,he wasn't sure she broke up with him then only a two weeks after the break up she begins dating another guy from the Mormon church & the guy is an ass hole he wants her to pick him instead of her own family and he brainwashes her and what not and by the way she moved out a week after the break up with other guy and she lives with this Mormon family now... well the mormon guy she is seeing now they have only been dating for 3 months and they are planning on getting married by June my entire family thinks this is wrong my grand ma, grandpa, mom, dad, aunts, uncles, god mothers, god fathers, cousins, brothers, sisters ... And the Mormon rules creep us out we just think she is making a HUGE mistake we have tried over and over be understanding with her and respect her decisions but we all care about her and don't want to see her get hurt and we have all given her advice because we are all concerned about her but she just doesn't listen or care and then my grandma was crying and she laughed out loud and we were at our annual family reunion and she spend the whole time on the phone with her boyfriend and her Mormon friends when she use to always be with us and she use to be so funny she would make us all laugh but not anymore she just goes like *GASP* What would jesus do? and me and my cousin said 'your not jesus though' and then my other cousin said ' he would do the same' and we started laughing and she rolled her eyes and then when my cousin Rudolph was saying bye she was like 'Bye take care' and she accidently hit him and he was like 'Oh yeah take care and you hit me' and we giggled and she said ' EXCUSE ME' and she always tells me to shut up and she is and she doesn't even bond with her family and in our family FAMILY IS THE #1. THING but yeah anytime i tell anybody they all look shock and no one thinks what she is doing is right
What do we do? Is there anything we can do
By the way she dropped out in school.. she was going to be a therapist but she dumped everything when she turned Mormon

Question #15:

What do you think of this poem?

Wishes Don't Come True

You cuddle with me to keep me warm
You kiss me every chance you get
You help me wheather the storm
You save me from my worst threats

You hold me as though I'd break
You love me unconditionally
You overlook my every mistake
You can't keep your eyes away from me

I wish you actually existed
I wish you actually cared
I wish I wasn't so twisted
I wish I wasn't so scared...

Question #16:

Virgo co worker acting hot and cold?

Question #17:

I need Cute baby girl names+BQ?

I'm writing a story and I need cute, pageant girl names for these kids:

1: 10 years old, blonde hair and blue eyes, does soccer, softball,gymnastics, karate, cheerleading and dance, helpful, caring, smart

2: 7 years old, brown hair and blue eyes, does soccer, gymnastics, karate, Cheerleading and dance, helpful, smart

3: 4 years old, brown hair and brown eyes, does gymnastics, karate, Cheerleading and dance, sweet, caring

4: 1 year old, blond hair and brown eyes, cute, sweet

The last name is Young

BQ: I need a title for the story. It's about a pageant family that the father is in The army. The mom is expecting another child.

Question #18:

I Want to Have Sex with My Father?

Okay I know the title is sick and gross and totally not what I wanted to ask but I found out people actually click on weird stuff like that so if you would please answer my real question since your here! ;)

Real Question: Do you think I should call CPS on my abusive mother?

Okay so a little background. I have lived with my grandparents for the first twelve years of my life(Im fifteen now).My mother got pregnant with me out of wed-locK(she was also in college) and had no way to take care of me so she gave me to my grandparents. They provided for me and were absolutly my parents in my eyes. I knew my mamaw wasnt my biological mother but in my eyes she was. My mother came every few weeks and visited me but we never had that mother-daughter bond. So anyway when I was twelve my mothers new baby daddy(boyfriend) and her made me move in with them. I hated this new guy. He was a mean man and very ghetto(Im white he was "Black"). Dont worry Im not racist but he acted like he had no common sence. He was a sterotypical black man. So after that he left her with my brother and me and she got another boyfriend which she later married. A few years later(Present day) there still married "seperated" But now she has another boyfriend while shes still married.
Aside from being a whore (My grandmother raised me very traditionally in the christian church) Living with my mother is absolute Hell. She is an unmedicated bipolar who refuses to take her medication to help her. She lashes out on everyone and my family(her brothers and sisters) think she psycotic and desreves to be locked up. She is so verbally abusive to me. Everyday she says things like "I hate you," "Your the devil" "Your Possesed" "I wish i had aborted you when I had the chance" "Your a bitch" "I cant stand you" "You make me sick." Everyday I go to bed crying. I used to be strong. Im a girl that never lets my feelings show or cry in front of people but Im broken down and shes getting the best of me. Aside from that she takes illegal presciption drugs. Shes a r.n and manager of her floor at the hospital so my family thinks shes stealing from the hospital. I mean theres always been random pills and bottles around the house but I never put 2 plus 2 together. Along with that she does weed bc although i dont smoke some ppl I knw do and so I know what It smells like. Her being biopolar, Having multiple illgal prescription drugs, and smoking pot I think her frame of mind right now is not right. Shes lost weight(She used to be arounf 250 and now shes 240, not much but you know) sleeps all the time and physically abuses my brother. She verbally abuses me bc she knows if she hit me Id hit her back so she dont play that. But she does hurt my brother. I honestly dont know what to do anymore. Tell me what I should do? I need someones help please dont not write! Should I call CPS and report her for stealing medicine? Should I live with my grandma again or my aunt whod be willing to take me in?Ive never met my father although I heard hes a crack addict, should I find him? Please I need Advice?

Thank you:)
First of all this is not a troll this is serious.To the Steven guy, I do want to be a author and a singer, thanks!

Also my mother dosent want to give up me and my brother. She thinks were hers and she laughs at me knowing no one can take us away from her. My aunt and grandmother have asked her but she always yells at them and says no. And I'd rather be in foster care than with her right now. Im not kidding when I say its that bad to were anywhere is better than with her. We live in a beautiful middle class neighborhood and you would never expect this of anyone.

Question #19:

Parents, do/would you go to work with pink eye?

I'm a preschool teacher and I have really bad pink eye in one eye. I went to the eye dr and got drops but she said i should stay home from work a day or two because its highly contagious. I have used my sick days this year unfortunately so i went to work today even though i have a drs. Note. I told my boss i had pink eye and she said "suck it up buttercup" and dont care that im there with the kids with pink eye. I have been sick with colds and the flu, as the other teachers too, and weve all missed a lot. Now its just coming out of our paychecks which i understand but i dont think I should be at work with small kids with pink eye. It is red watery and pussy.

Question #20:

Is this plot good so far?

It was just written, so it is raw.

She is in a relationship with a gentleman named Francis; they are engaged. He is controlling, intrusive and abusive. Because of this, she becomes homicidal, but just in her mind at first. Her name is Grace. She is 20 years old and doing the education necessary to become a Paramedic. She currently works as a dog trainer.

Both of her parents were abusive and are barely ever in her life, but that is mainly because she does not want to be too close to them and has actually lost the bond that normal parents would have with their children as she spent most of her childhood all the way to the age of nineteen in foster care.

She begins to have sexual urges towards the idea of killing and torturing people and animals. It begins to progress into something more serious as Francis tramples on her more so. He is getting on her case of being just a dog trainer and not being the woman he wants; a clean freak, a house wife, a lady who dresses well and puts on tons of make-up, and does her hair and such. Also, he bugs her about her weight which in turn she gained due to the stress he induced on her.

One evening, they get into a heated argument. He begins to punch her real good and pretty much beats her up. She on the other hand, in response she stabs him in the neck with her blade. It was self-defence, but she panicked as he had died as a result of it.

She then drags the body over to the bedroom and throws his body onto the bed, packs her belongings, gets her two dogs, and steals his keys. Grace cleans the place of all her prints; she wears latex gloves and booties. Also she has her hair up in a bun to lessen her chance of leaving a strand.

Grace drives the car to a gas station near the ferry to get off the island and calls a friend of hers from a phone booth out of the view of any camera. They make plans to meet up at the ferries. She tells her friend to bring a large empty sports bag -she is going to get into it and be placed in the trunk with her luggage-. Also, both tags of the dogs will be removed.

She then drives the car to some deserted place in a forest and wipes her DNA and prints off it and leaves it there. Lucky for her, as it is winter time...the ground is hard as a rock so she leaves no footprints as she treks with her luggage and dogs all the way out of the forest and makes her way to the ferries. It is only 6p.m. at this time when she had left the car. She was aware that her friend would be there waiting by the time she would get there.

She meets her friend at a restaurant close by with no cameras. It is a busy one, so the servers will not be able to remember them as much as they are to preoccupied with many customers. The discuss their plans over a meal and her situation and such.

When they get over to the other side, the main land, her friend will help with creating her a new identity. Her friend has ties. She needs a new name as well as her dogs and she will be wearing eye contacts.

In a hidden spot in the parking lot where her friend had parked, she climbed into the trunk and into the sport bag along with her dogs' tags.

This is what I have so far. Its not done. Why is she running? Its because she cannot have a record as it will kill her chance to becoming a Paramedic. Also, she becomes a serial killer later on in the story.

Thanks.
'spent most of her childhood in foster care
Erasing her prints and DNA makes it a lot harder for the authority to catch her. She has never committed a crime so her finger prints and such are not in the system. She needs to keep it that way by cleaning up everything.

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